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I am pleased to see that you have drawn all the details extremely well, and you didn't even forget about the eyelashes being reflected ...


Wow, dude. That is a really great technique. Assuming that you have painted with a reference, I think it's safe to say that you underst...


May I? My first impression was: This looks so cute, so different from your other paintings. Where on others you worked on a realistic "...


As I don't know if the focus of the critique should be the image itself or your illustration of the process, I will address both: 1. Th...

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I am pleased to see that you have drawn all the details extremely well, and you didn't even forget about the eyelashes being reflected in the eye itself!
The shading is magnificent and the iris is done in a very realistic way. There is no doubt you have skill. As you stated you just drew the eye of your husband, probably for the purpose of a study or practice, so there's not much originality in it, I'm afraid. Still, the technique more than makes up for that.
However, I have one small problem: While the eye and the eyebrow are super realistic, it feels like the surrounding skin, especially the nose and right under the eyebrow, is a bit flat. Now, don't get me wrong, the shading is fantastic, it's just, if you can see all the tiny wrinkles under his eye, I believe you also should be able to see pores, imperfection and all that stuff that creates the texture of the skin. I think, your picture lacks that in the darkest areas and also in that light spot right under the eyebrow. Maybe it's becaus it is a close-up of a tiny part of the face, but having that many wrinkles under the eye and almost no imperfections on the skin surrounding it, creates kind of a contrast, like if he had the eye of an old man and the skin of a woman... I hope you understood, what I meant :P
Red bra
New approach ot hair and killing time. Next picture is gonna be big, I promise ;) (For bigger size, download)
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Inspired by a lyric line "This masquerade cannot compare wordless glances, faceless stares"
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Blue-F-Phoenix Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch :-)
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AnimalAsLeader Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
youre welcome :P
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scythe-meisters Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the watch!! :3
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AnimalAsLeader Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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scythe-meisters Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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wisahkecahk Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Kind thanks for the watch!!!
I am very happy you like my work!!!!!!!
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AshVanGuard Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, and thanks for the watch as well :-)
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LittleAmeba Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ver much for the watch! Have a nice day ^^
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CatharsisGaze Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Professional General Artist
Danke fürs Watchen und willkommen auf deviantArt! ;3
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